kamorama

First of all, this sounds like a very good story. I wonder what could happen next... well, plenty could happen but I guess it's up to you. Now, on to ...

Oh boy, this is an interesting topic of conversation. Well, I would say that this is definately disturbing, and I'm glad that my school doesn't have anything like this. They ...

Characters I've killed... personally I have no problem having horrible things happen to my characters, my friends can verify this. Actually, it's kinda fun... Anyway... The character I'm thinking of ...

My only problem really with the text was this; He opened a drawer, and felt around, intill his hands... It should be until, but I'm pretty sure that's just a ...

One of the specific things I noticed was that some of your sentances don't fit witht the rest of the paragraph. I don't know exactly what it is that bugs ...

Sure. Thanks for the read. :mrgreen:

Lin hadn’t had the intention of throwing the rock. He had barely even known that he was doing it until he saw Yullis lying on the ground howling in pain, ...

I have to apologise for this before I write it, but this story goes very slowly. There isn't enough information to draw me in and make me interested in the ...

Wow! If it makes you feel better, I have never heard of this myth and I enjoyed it. I think you captured the essence well. (I went googling and looked ...

Eep... I have seen Dollhouse and I hope I never have to again... Anyway, thank you for posting more, even though I just read the first chapter. Very interesting. I ...

I think in my review I have to agree with quite a few people on this one. I'd like a little more of a description of the setting. What is ...

Aha! Fitz lives on in someone's heart! As much as it has been ages since I read those books I haven't met anyone else who has actually taken the time ...

Actually, it means of winter, but close enough. :smt001. Let me see, Frieze was actually about a half-dragon girl who had been abandoned in a town full of people who ...

Okay. How do I put this simply. To say the least, it's very interesting, and I think that it is for certain a story that I will be following as ...

If you couldn't tell from the title, I'm not really good with posts. At Least, not posts about myself. As fun as it is to look around here, I prefer ...