kamorama

Well, I know where I am at the moment we say things like this: Jenk - Awesome Woot - Sweet! Pwned - You lost. N00b - Idiot or imbecile.

Alrighty! Seeing as the others got to my more nitpicky stuff, I'll go for the overall story. To begin, some parts of your story seemed to take up a little ...

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Wonderful! I love it when I get to read another piece of a story I like. SinceI haven't been on in awhile, I like being greeted with a story I ...

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For all of those who found this story mildly interesting and are looking forward to the second chapter, I am posting chapter 2 tommorrow, (hopefully) some time in the middle ...

Well, I have to say that your work definately has it's own flair of words. I liked it a lot more than I thought I would. There were a few ...

And yet you still have the thread of Sauron in the background, and I hope there isn't any doubt that Sauron is pure evil.