kaiden

Haha yeah ok so if Soto, Kira, and Aisha are all poor, what category do they fit in? like sure they might be of different ethnicities but maybe to others ...

oooh nice! i like where this is going. just know that you have someone waiting to read the next part! I just wanted to clear a few things up. Because ...

nice! sounds intenst. i almost felt like i knew the feeling but i really don't. Great rhyming. I felt like the last part was a little weird, maybe you shouldn't ...

Ok so yeah now I see where you're going with this. I just wonder how Bella will react to Jacob, and what Mike may be thinking right now. keep up ...

wow that was very... elaborate. i really like how you incorporate all the different cultures into one story. Each character's story is very interesting and can be another story all ...

hey first i just wanna say thanks for reviewing my poem. i was actually browsing through your portfolio and i see you've done a lot a of poetry and i ...

He was a nice guy, timid and young She was a party girl, looking for fun He wanted love, truthful and pure Her love life moved in a blur He ...

Hey nice story, Luke's got quite a temper eh? I just wanted to point out that Alex called Jason "Jacob" in the beginning where he mentions that he's with Amy. ...

but i felt it would be nice if you had at least one review right? lol Ok so i may not have read twilight but i understand the story for ...

i know how you feel when it comes to putting your writing out there. kind of scary huh? i think you should just go for it. put them out there ...

i'm from california too though maybe that's not so surprising. yes the heat is a little unbearable but burning hell? mmm i'll give that to arizona or even texas.(only lived ...

hey i'm Kaiden! the message i got told me to do this so i'm doing it! hehe. just to let anyone know i'm a very on and off writer. some ...