kaiden

Not bad at all! :) It is a sweet little poem, you've definitely achieved that. Very optimistic and with a good rhythm. I don't mean to sound a little dark ...

hmmmm interesting. I think for every sentence every thing that time smells like should have some connection. You sort of did it for most of the sentences. Time smells like ...

Maybe you could just make your own stereotype. The Radicals! Radically different from the rest of society But then they turn into those (again, stereotypical) people who think they are ...

Oh. My. GOD. Yes I HAVE to see this movie. I read the book many times as a young kid and the trailers blew me away. "I didn't want to ...

People like to classify others because it makes life seem so much simpler. And because usually all of the same stereotype hang out together anyways. Sorry but that's the real ...

Oh god I do :D. I still read them, love how deeply made ya think sometimes. I read recently that Hobbes is based on a famous skeptic and Calvin a ...

I know it ended a lonnnnggg time ago, but I think I'm still sad that it ended... It was such an awe-inspiring comic that I literally grew up with it. ...

7/10. I like stories that have a more, gritty approach to super powers instead of the usual tights and cape, running around using powers for the greater good. but i ...

What does this date mean to you? What, in your opinion, has this done to America as well? I heard or read somewhere that 9/11 is the day America finally ...

I agree as well, people need to stop worrying about things that have nothing to do with them. It's a free country and if gay people can't get married, then ...

I LOVE IT. That was incredible! Love how it seems so uplifting in the first half and then with one line, it all comes crashing down to despair. Very nicely ...

Ok so I'm feeling the emotion, but i think you should cut out the whole skiiers are skiing boarders are boarding part. Though you are painting a picture, it seems ...

Do you think you are?

The first question I have is, is this poem theme based on summer or all the seasons? I know it's metaphors and similes (honestly i still don't see the difference) ...

I need that smile if his. you might wanna change if to of. Great poem, a situation that's definitely not uncommon, especially in high school. It seemed to rhyme in ...