kaiden

I know "How you doing" is grammatically incorrect but I feel like that's just how I have to say it. :) Hi how you doing? It’s been a while since ...

Wow nice. Very cool. Definitely a "I'll give all my love to you" kind of poem. Interesting. I like the rhythm and rhyming here. I thought it flowed really well. ...

Creepy. Dark. I like it. Sorry I usually don't look for stuff to critique unless it's screaming at me. Nothing I read really bothered me while I read it. Seems ...

Allen spoke first, “Sergeant Corbet you’re a General now, congratulations. How much butt kissing did you have to do to get there?” General Corbet’s face remained passive and Allen continued ...

Wow thanks guys! I appreciate the comments! I'll definitely look into editing this piece now.

It's been a while since I've posted anything. Then again, it's been a while since I've found motivation to write. Hope you enjoy. Unedited, unrevised, one shot. It’s been a ...

ROMEO CAPULET Romeo looked suspiciously at Lyndsie, he had conciously measured the entire distance he chased Maddie and knew that he was still within his own patrol borders. If he ...

ROMEO CAPULET Romeo admitted to himself that he was caught off guard, but he did not get angry. It was understandable for rebels to act defiant in their final moments. ...

ROMEO CAPULET He had found one of the girls on the wanted posters. Her name was Maddie and the report says that she's twenty five. Her mother is also a ...

Romeo sat in the locker room staring at his uniform. He sat there, looking at his handgun and combat knife. One number always popped into his head. Twenty seven. Since ...

Okay okay... it was pretty good. (just so you know, I write like I talk so yeah...). I thought it was good but I felt like you could have done ...

Hey I liked it. I liked the first four lines because they were connected. The night at sea and the froth of a majestic wave. I thought that was nice. ...

Thanks for the review guys! I never expected my poem to be in the featured works, it's a big first for me. :D but just so everyone knows, when I ...

Haha yes irony was exactly what I was getting at. And if you feel like you need some pure evil punishers I can make one.

I think I'll join this one!!! Name: Romeo Capulet ;D Age (5-50): 30 Gender: Male Rebel/Citizen/Punisher: Punisher About him/her: Had it not been for his job as a Punisher he ...