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Well, the way I wrote it it was more like my hand was moving without my mind really going along. It was written from her present day looking into the ...

Thanks :) did this one day bored in school, and typos are common,I type too fast!! Thank you for the input,I'll get right on it

Not stupid, I mean, it is better than I could've ever expressed ;D and thanks!! That's does actually help. Hope there might be a second part to the story!!

I enjoyed it, no matter how much carnage you speak of. I see maybe one or two spelling mistakes but nothing that cant be proof-read out. I enjoed it and ...