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Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Book - I guess...
I like your idea, and this is written well. Except you changed tenses. Other than that I think you have something really good started. Good luck!
Mar 30, 2008

But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)