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Interesting... My mother's Bipolar as well (so's her husband, I believe. And her sister was, too [she was actually lost to suicide] ). She's also got a number of other ...

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rhyme

Lean.

'Lo, imp. Nice to meet you. :D I write quite a bit of everything, I guess. I just recently starting getting into short stories, because my attention span for the ...

Apparently, I'm new. And I don't excel at the whole "introducing myself" thing, but I found it inconsiderate not to do so, and inconsiderate all the same to do so ...

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Well, I liked the rhyme scheme. And the usage of the metaphorical (metaphorical? I'm assuming) vocabulary was effective. I enjoyed how it conveyed a lot of emotion in a short, ...

I liked it. The imagery it evoked was pleasant.

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Nice. Lacked organization, really, but that's what made it entertaining. I don't really laugh much, but I kind of chuckled a few times reading this. It becomes tedious, though, toward ...

Intriguing... ...But for some reason I was expecting an elaboration on the plot. I liked it, though. It has a sense of mystery and precision, kind of a twist on ...