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i like this. your words paint a beautiful picture for any readers, and i like the way you use plenty of descriptive words without having to take it overboard and ...

this is either the most unconventional poetry i've ever seen, or not poetry. i think this may go under the category of a descriptive essay. however, the ideas aren't bad. ...

this poem is unconventional. it's like nothing i've ever written. it's crazy and personifies love in a horrific way. i hope you like it, but understand if you don't. :? ...

i don't like this. it sounds like you might be trying to hard to rhyme, rather than just writing what you're feeling. also, the rhyming pattern bothers me. it seems ...

i love this. i was gonna post a review on it before but it said it wasnt long enough and it rejected my review somehow? ok well i love the ...

i liked it a lot. it provides a creepy feeling, without needing to be overly morose or morbid. i think the first three lines are the most incredible.

THE BRIGHT LIGHTS this poem kinda sounds like a rap, and should be said fast. it's kinda wild, and rather unconventional, but i'm still proud of it :) the bright ...

There's Someone on the Other Side of the Glass. by Kisba i know that you have trouble stayin awake when you're in school i know that you've been trying masquerading ...