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Here's another sonnet by me! I'm not really particularly fond of sonnets because of its rules but because our English teacher told us to make another one this year, I ...

What do you guys think of this? Oh I have a new sonnet! Check it out soon!

Hope that someone can review this too...

Fand makes some very good points, and I do think it would be interesting to scrap the rhyme for the next draft. As it is, I'll look at what you ...

Hahaa thanks for the review! He was soo pleased with what you said! hehe! It's not exactly old language but somewhat patterned to it. Am so glad that you like ...

Sniff... this poem is so sentimental! Really liked it! It also made me want to reach out my friends but... they're probably at home eating or something! haaahaa! I loved ...

Haahaa hello brix! =) I think of myself as a tomboyish girl too except I don't play basketball well but I think I do things that girls would be disgusted ...

Honestly? This poem has potential. Your spotty and inconsistent rhyming patterns make that difficult to see. As it is now, your stanzas go: A-A-A-A / B-B-C-D / E-F-G-F / H-A-I-K. ...

I was again inspired by... nothing. So I decided to just write about it, nothing. How can you describe nothing? hehe sorry if it's amateurish and the rhymes are all ...

This is a sonnet to counteract my own -- "Darkness in Love" that was made by my bro. He wanted me to put this up and see what people think ...

Wow, really dramatic =) Even though the ending wasn't explicitly shown. I liked how the story progressed, it didn't leave any holes. I hope that I'd be able to read ...

Heehee I might sound very redundant with almost the same comments, but still I'd like to say that your story really sounds promising and I like your concept. Your title ...

Cecilia Ahern became one of my favorite authors after reading this. Wow, she writes so intensely and emotionally and you can REALLY feel the characters. And it's a really sweet ...

I thought that the life of a mathematical number would be interesting... until I found out that it wasn't exactly about 3.14 but about a boy (how come it's always ...

I've never heard of this one.. I think it's really interesting. Stories of vampires just fascinate me!! Maybe it's because I thought I was one a while back... waaaay back