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No matter what? I think the question was already posed, but what about self-defense? If it comes down to it, I will fight for my life, even if it means ...

Thanks for that! It was really helpful. :D

Did this one a while back. When I first wrote it, I thought it was pretty good, but now that I've (arguably) "grown," I don't know. I think it could ...

Is there a right or wrong? By that, I mean, is ther such a things as what you should and shouldn't do? Can we assume that we should be allowed ...

I also didn't appreciate the two-line format nor the flow, but I really liked the imagery that you depicted. It seemed a little cliched at first, but I grew to ...

Hey, I really like this. I like the imagery. I love the last stanza, it just makes the whole idea come together, that it was really just about musings in ...

I usually stay away from valentine poems, but this is pretty clever. I like the parallel of the first and last line. Some lines are a little stilted, but overall ...

:lol: Love this! It made me smile, haha. Nice one. :D

Wow. I actually really like this. Hi btw, I'm a newbie. Lol. Anyway, I like the urgency. I love the third stanza: lipstick powder the spotlight will hide me the ...

Hey guys, I'm Jessie, an 18yr old Filipina. Just wanted to say hey. :D