juniordame

You made perfect sense! Thank you so much for that, I'm glad that someone else got it.

Actually it's a little bit of both, and then some. I kind of went all over the place with this, so sorry if it was a little hard to understand ...

*Forgive the cheesy, cliched parts, I wrote this during the wee hours of morning, and I don't know, it just came out like this and I couldn't stop adding more. ...

Wow. Such cynicism. Lol. Although I do reluctantly agree that the coexist fad is too idealistic, and will ultimately fail as a system of thought, I joined the group in ...

I agree with Galatea and Manny. Censorship, even with supposedly "good intentions" does nothing but serve the interests of the people who want to do the censoring. Nine times out ...

Hi there, I really like this poem as well, the only thing I can say is that the line: I try to speak but I find I’m unable. I personally ...

Hi there, haven't been to yws for so long, but I just wanted to browse around, and your title caught my eye. I think Fand already covered all the critiquing ...

I think it would be extremely hard for society to shift their views concerning male and female equality, simply because women are naturally at a physical disadvantage. They get paid ...

Exodus 22:1 If a thief is caught in the act of housebreaking and beaten to death, there is no bloodguilt involved Self defense is fine in the bible. I agree ...

I loved this too, and I agree about the capitalizations. I didn't really get why there's a grey white dove though. Does it symbolize something specific? Monogamy? Freedom? Purity? All ...

This sort of reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back. I wasn't very proud of it. Having said that, I like the suspense here, the reader is ...

Suzanne gave me the idea to make my own introductory thread, so here it is. Hey guys, I'm Jessie, an 18yr old Filipina. Just wanted to say hey. Hey Aedomir, ...

I love the last stanza. Don't know why... Love the imagery. That's all I can say. Love it.

I like the idea behind this. But I think some of the lines have too many syllables, and the next line after have too little. It's not very balanced. It's ...

Hmmm. I like it but i dont really get it. It has a good flow and every thing. I don't know. Is it meant for the reader to imagine what ...