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julialang

  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror Re: Sink

    Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it! I'll be sure to change the punctuation on the story and look more carefully through it, you see I severely dislike ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror Re: Sink

    Thank you so much for your feedback! It was my first time posting on here, so I wasn't even sure if I would get anything at all, this came as ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Horror Re: Sink

    Wow thank you for the feedback! This was the first thing I've ever published, so it was great to finally get some feedback. I will take everything into account that ...

    Feb 2, 2016


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien