julia002

The description in this is really good! I could picture everything perfectly without anything being too wordy. I also really liked the part where he hides in the painting, I ...

I somewhat rushed with the title so I agree that it doesn't depict the story perfectly, thank you for the review!

Thank you so much for the review, Yoshi! I love to hear that you liked the ending:)

I like how it started with "you, you, you" but quickly it became about the death and tragedy of others. The last two lines were a very fulfilling and a ...

This is my first time posting any of my work so it means so much to me to get a positive response! You comparing my writing to Treasure Island and ...