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thanks for the advice The books isnt all just about the christmas but it is a big part of the story. although it is good its a little slow but ...

ok thank you to everyone who edited my story. Sry I have two copies saved on my computer since my aunt reads over my work. the slashes are from when ...

as of July 13, 2008 this story has been reposted due to revisions Sorry it took so long but I played around with it a bit taking in all of ...

thank you again Slammoth for editing my story. Yes, I do have a problem with 'then' and 'than' Its a habit I am trying to break. Your help will make ...

my dad has a website so I see where your coming from with how much it can cost. Even still i would not pay. My parents would have to do ...

I changed a few other things as well just so it made more sensse... Ill post the First Chapter soon, but I have to trype it up since I only ...

thanks...I made the changes and 'then' & 'than' are always something I mix up. I had completely missed 'wrapped' Thanks again!!! :D

The prologue ended up being a lot longer then I intended. I did not think it was long enough though to break it into to parts though. Please tell me ...

that is true it is just a dream Maybe its just the way I read it...its probably fine. Still I cant wait for MORE!

Slammoth covered alot of it but there were a few things here and there that I saw... The storm had died down by the time I was finished cleaning up ...

thanks, and yes i have written the 1, 2, and 3 chapters but im constantly changing them around and the prlogue seems to be the only thing that doesnt change

This is one of the stories I started. It not neccessarily my favorite...but when the story gets going later on in the chapters its alot better. Prologue The sun seemed ...

it does sound good and my middle name is Simone! With some detail and a little more elaboration it could develop into a decent story. Although I would feel a ...

if you copied this and handed it out to all the Twilighters at my school they would shoot you. They are diehard twilight fans. I tried the read the books ...

I kind of get it. You are trying to lead up to the last part that is the reason for moonlight. It makes sense but maybe the opening part should ...