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considering the fact that you said: This is not your parents "Star Wars." You've seen to have done your homework on it I really liked it. It kept me wanting ...

its not based on anything Tamora Pierce is my favorite author but just because i right about a female warrior does not mean i copied alot of people do that ...

wow these were really cool where did you find all the pics cause they're really good my mom got photo shop and i cant even figure it out there are ...

wow! that kept me interested the whole time there was one error that i saw u wrote: shaking cream when i think u meant shaving cream otherwise the story was ...

im not sure what this story is going to be about either it doesnt really reveal a plot also it made me feel as if you were asking questions that ...

hey hez i decided an go critique all your stuff since you seemed to do that for mine, anyway you cant be so attentive about posting stuff, post your story ...

although i am not a twilight fan i have seen the covers and they actually have nothing to do with the story there is alot of smudges which can always ...

im a sucker for butterflies since my grandma loves them!n :D anyway i like the last three mainly because they were all detailed closer up and blury far away it ...

like snoink said it is a little small but the angles good if you enlarge the pic you will most likely get more reviews i do like that some trees ...

you might want to get a better picture of the wizard of oz. im not trying to be mean but my mom is a huge wizard of oz fan and ...

Pic #1: i like the idea of using black and white and the angle is good for the size of the picture although you may want to zoom in more ...

i love this picture! its both serious and funny is this a picture of people you know or just someone you saw? good choice with the black and white it ...

aww its so cute! . my dogs make the same face when i stick a camera in their faces. :D hey but thats what cameras are for right i like ...

cool! there are so many! did you make all the middle man ones? you might end up seeing people with these Icons pretty soon i liked the 'what do you ...

I posted the rewrite but not here since it would only get to confusing. I change alot in the beginning but kept the story of riley's past. It is still ...