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make sure you do reviews before you post!!! 2 Reviews per story/pic post Enjoy YWS Hey In_the_Moonlight we seem to be following each other

hey you critique my story so much I figured it was time I returned the favor. I read part one just so I know what is going on Comments in ...

CONGRATS!!!! Thats great keep it up!!!

thanks I'll add that in!!!

I thought so too, but you can never be too ill leave it in its mainly just to help explain things better I have a few more things to add ...

As explained in the title these tips can be applied to several different styles of writings. They were mainly for essays originally, but you can bend them to your will. ...

hez...um...on here I edited the part about "Do I have the book?..." part out of Chapter 1 Part 1... to make a cliffhanger. The version I emailed you has it ...

anyone have any idea why the format is all crazy...maybe its just my computer, but does anyone else have the story like wider then their screen. I don't know that ...

Ok WHO IS CARTER? you seemed to have asked that alot. Carter was mentioned during the prologue when describing Darious. Very important connection there. Next PROPHECIES. It took me forever ...

Ok I am very sorry this took so long before I got it posted. I was editing the first half plus this second half to provide just enough information, but ...

Tortall Books by Tamora Pierce...this includes.... The Lioness Quartet The Immortals Quartet Protector of the Small Quartet Tricksters Choice and Tricksters Queen Terrier and Bloodhound. My sister int

I added HOOKS. They are at the bottom of the entry and come in handy when writing essay that needs a good grade. -Jules

Ok, like In the Moonlight's Don Quixote de la Mancha story this was for the same project. We were told what the story was about then we had to make ...

I have a few things to say... 1) You captured the story better then I did. By the way I'm gonna post mine tonight. 2)Good idea. You know what mines ...

dont worry, school doesn't actually start til Thursday. But I was freakin out over a ten page Math Packet with problems I couldn't solve. But I finished it. Now if ...