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Haha... I liked this you definitely got your message across. Now I definitely know who not to ask when I want a critique. Just kidding!! The rythem was good and ...

thanks I'm glad you like it. :D

And a note to all future critiquers- Feel free to be harsh. Ooo... I should have fun with this! ~~~~~~~~~~~[/color] Chapter 1 Kerani , of Shira , watched the dry, ...

You just made a Poe fan happy Yay that means alot. And I did mean mothers with the 's'. Poe had a real mother who died of turburculoses (spell check?) ...

Looks like OCD (Obsessive Cullen Disorder) has spread!!!! GREAT POEM!!! If I showed it to people at school I would be run out of town! Well not the town, but ...

Version 2 has been posted on Dec 15 930 PM EST Please enjoy I feel version two is much better

Thanks, it's only a first draft, but I'm not a good poet. Poetry is usually something I don't write so I feel this is a good start. Thanks for the ...

For school we are mainly focusing on works by Edgar Allan Poe. Our project was to create a poem to use as an Epitaph for Poe. An Epitaph is a ...

1) Total Number of Books You Own: I never really counted. Before my sister moved out: about 500 After my sister moved out: between 100-200 -we like the same kind ...

Nope sorry I like Disney, well like the theme parks the channel is iffy TPBM plays sports all year round

Happy Thanksgiving! I went (like always) to my grandparents, on my dad's side. My cousins all come and we go and eat lunch/dinner at the lodge down the street. I ...

Wow, I liked it. Like -trying to find a good word- it was as if I was there witnessing the things you said in your song. Nice work!

I already critiqued this like a month ago before your mom made you take it off. It's somewhere around here. Sorry In_the_Moonlight but I don't have time to go through ...

ya... I should probably have taken this off. I had my debate last Wednesday. I got a solid score in everything but the time. My team had this plan that ...

In Language Arts class for the past weeks we have been working on debates based on presidential candidates. Anyway we have everything written out only we can't put that on ...