jujubean05

When life hands you lemons make beef stew! When life hands you lemons chunk them at people you don't like. If you short get on a chair before you try ...

I did this for a contest :D. I'm very fond of my thesaurus, but I've seemed to have misplaced my favorite one. :( I do use quite alot though. Thanks ...

Friday night Paul decided to go out clubbing. He walked up to the door and gave his fake I.D. and twenty dollars to the bouncer. The bouncer, still looking at ...

Music drifts through the beautiful blue headphones. The simple sight of them soothes my very soul. The pure, unwavered sound that passes threw these tiny ear buds warms my heart. ...

What does everyone else think about this short short story?? :pirate3:

What does everyone else think about this short short story?? :pirate3:

Thanks :D

Read the revised version below the orginal please! See what you think of that one!

Please read my revised version. I don't think it is any better, but I don't know..

Thank you all. Demeter, by the way, I am actually working on a novel. It's going to take me awhile, but I hope to have it published one day.

I changed the format and changed some words and sentences! Hope you like it!!!

I keep it kinda of vague on her where-abouts, because I want my readers to be able to think for themselves on how she got there and why she is ...

Someone please comment!!!!

Thanks I've read most of those books. But Thanks sooooo much for your help!

I don't really car for this poem myself. I don't know why I posted it. Please check out my short stoies though!!