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Re: Love poems from my past
Lovedrunk I really can't describe it without a blushing face I hope everyone has felt it had their heart beat at this pace I really can't describe it Its really ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Books!!!!
Thanks:D
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: "Perfection"
But it is still real!
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
This is super easy tbe second choice!!!!!!! Would you rather be followed and obsessed over constantly by a sparkly vampire or live with Justin Bieber singing to you every Second ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: "Perfection"
Its for a contest. That's why its posted.
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Mask
I keep going higherOn this ladder of griefThe clouds of sorrow clearBut for moments very brief. This is my favorite stanza. I like it alot. It is very good
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Running Away
I like it! :D
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: "Perfection"
What is perfection? To me it is the story of my life. My mother and everyone else expects it from me. Amazing grades, exellent health, exquisite band performances, and fantastics ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Shattered
You gave me hope You gave me faith You took me home You gave me strength (Very very good) Like a bird in the sky You raised me high You ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Duty calls
With a gray hood over my I couldn't see anything, but that was the least of my problems. (Add eyes in there) My hands were feeling soft and wet, almost ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: the star who couldnt twinkle
Okay, capitalization is key! There is no capitalization at all! Then you need commas. After long openers to a sentence -long prepotional phrases- put commas. Also when you don't absolutely ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Gone
Every so often, she gave me a smile and her blue-green eyes would come alive and make me forget about everything else ( Try making me forget instead of and ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Headphones
Thanks:D
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Paul and Paulette
It's for a contest.
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: What if...
That's easy. I'd save the person, then became a famous hero! What if you were forced to marry a monkey, and tried to kill you because there were no bananas ...
Feb 20, 2011
