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Pieces of my soul, scatterd to point the way. *scattered* Parts of me, my life, freshly hung each day. Myself, bared to the world, with everything to show and nothing ...

The leaves roll in by a spot by the lake, over silver waters they sail to our feet, under a white-hot sun where jet hair flows through my hands; crushed ...

Anymore reviews??

Thanks for the review. -Juliann

Prologue Hot breath on the base of my neck sent shivers through every nerve. Time seemes to have stopped. My life would never had ended this way, but Katrinia loved ...

Thank you! I have really been considering adding more. I've been a little discouraged here lately about writing and I've been super busy. This week is spring break though so ...

I was wondering if this would be a good prologue for a book??? Hot breath on the base of my neck sent shivers through every nerve. Life seemed to have ...

Thanks for the comments!

Wind raised the long curls off the nape of my neck. Leaves danced over my black combat boots. Dark grey clouds billowed over-head. Fog made it impossible to see anything ...

Do you guys like the format or no?

Yesterday I was a sprout, Youthful, young, taintless and unblemished. Try just unblemished. I had nothing to worry about. Today I'm a fresh flower, Bright coloured, vivid, loved and cherished. ...

I’m sorry I gave you this rose, And I’m sorry I turned it black. Sorry for every lie I said; Wishing now I can take it back. I’m sorry that ...

with a million things to say, Use capital letters if your going to use punctuations my mind growing weak i think about you all the time, all these words to ...

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Eyes watching, it’s in the fireplace, An evil, burning face Whispering, I know what you desire. Before bursting in to fire. (I like te rhyme scheme) Mouth laughing, it’s in ...