judi_patootie

Towards the end you go But I’m no Superhero. I’m no Superhero. i don't think you should repeat it again... i think it would sound better if it was just ...

Id much rather have juice.. unless of course the choice of soda was Mountain Dew... cuz thats the best

This is deep but i think i get the meaning. I really liked it and keep writing. ~~*Judi Patootie*~~

You are very gifted and i don't have anything to critique because you are much better than i. Keep it up! (seriously) ~~*Judi Patootie*~~

love it! Great haiku humor. if im havin a bad hair day i just stick to some kind of headband. ~~*Judi Patootie*~~

I loved this poem and totally agree with it. Valentine's day sux! i didn't get to see any of my friends on it because i was out of state. But ...

I liked it... except it made me a little depressed because of the kind of mood. You're right the twist at the end does make the poem different from others. ...

This poem was... good. Umm probably a little too deep for someone my age but one thing i did catch that sounded a little funny was when you said: In ...

thnx ill keep all that stuff in mind

i need some help on thinking of a better title but here is the poem -------------------------------- Here I sit ignored each day. Who am I to be seen. I wait ...

I personally really liked reading this poem. The title fits it perfectly. And the way you describe it so a person sees pictures is great. Keep it up! Au Revoir ...

Brad, I loved this poem. I have no critiques because this is much better than anything I would be able to write at my age. But i really enjoyed reading ...

I don't think that the title really fits with what you write about in this poem and the last two lines just come out of nowhere... at least that's how ...

I think you're ending just leaves the reader hanging. You should have a way to cut it off and let the reader know that it is over. Otherwise the rest ...

I loved this poem... umm for your problem i would suggest not using so many words that relate to medicine use some more common known and it won't sound so ...