Young Writers Society

Hey hey Mickey! I'm glad you got a warm welcome to YWS but of course I wouldn't expect any less. :) It really is a great site, full of wonderful ...

Hey hey! I get to be the first one to comment! Hopefully I can give some good suggestions. First, in the way of a general impression, I really liked the ...

Hey there! Okay so I agree with the others on most of the the things they said. I like the fact that there is a bit of mystery to the ...

Hey guys thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm taking all the suggestions into account and revising. Hopefully I can get that up soon!

I am a huge fan of abstract stuff, the subtleties and such. Loved the fact that all of this was dialougue! Pete is very realistic and I've found that creating ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah she's not French herself, she just knows how to speak it. I just don't know how to get that across ...

Oh, how this gets me excited for this month :) I've never done WriMo before but I have a feeling that it's going to be kind of how you described ...

Hey Toxic! Just know that this site is great! So many good writers, all with different stuff to bring to the table. I'm excited to see what you bring! Don't ...

I don't have much to add to the previous comments, except that I can't wait to hear the rest of it! Beautiful imagery and language, it really made me step ...

Hi! First off, just wanted to say GREAT JOB! I was impressed with the maturity of the story, the flow of the plot, and the depth I found. Extremely well ...

Hey there! This story shows quite a bit of promise. It works really well as a flash fiction and I think you should keep it as such. But details still ...

Julie picks her head up off my chest. “What are we doing Sammy?” Sunlight streams through the window, it’s noon. “Hey Sammy, order up!” Raul yelled at me passing by ...

The sun sweeps onto the porch where I sit and the wind blows gently, mixing the smell of outside with the smell of baking cookies. I sigh with contentment. My ...

Hi Borntoshop! First off let me say that I really like the plot of the story. Going from person to person in the house and examining the time frame from ...

Okay so I want to read the rest of it! It's a really interesting story line and this is a great first page that gets the reader interested and wanting ...