joshuapaul

Ha! I wish I could claim that. Pike underwent gender realignment in an early edit, before the puppies were introduced. One of those pesky pronouns was bound to sneak through ...

Kafka, thank you so much. I needed this. I've already thinned it out, cut out a lot of the extraneous/deliberately vague scenes and details. It's more focussed. I have woven ...

Yes. The original, can be found here: I'm fine, why do you ask? So why repost? Because I have changed it a lot and I am about to submit it ...

This is more than I could have hoped for, thank you CC. There's always nitpicks, spelling errors, grammatical errors I miss. It doesn't matter how many times I run my ...

Like I said, I don't normally make a habit of responding to reviewers. And I don't want you to think it was just a rant. Look, if you want to ...

I don't normally make it a habit of responding to reviewers, but since you took the time to consider my work, I feel I should at least point out one ...

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I guess the point I want to make is about plausibility. Even the most implausible scenarios can be overlooked so long as everything else is consistent. What happened when I ...

I will review this in due course.

This should be featured. I will be back to review soon enough.

Hi, thanks for reading. It was 16 as there is a particularly offensive word, which I have since removed. The word begins with F.

Language.

Thanks for your kind words, I will be considerate of your advice when it comes time to edit. Also, more will be coming soon.

Will be back to review...

Thanks, Audy. Very helpful advice and you definitely provide a little perspective. I have stripped this back a bit, so maybe I have taken too much away. Maybe it needs ...