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Re: Ad Infinitum (first 5.8k words, tentative title)
God damn it Sarg. You make reviewing tough. Every time I go to critique this my fingers strike the keys but only one line comes out, over and over. 'This ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Alex
Thanks SmylinG. I don't want my rant to overshadow my work so I have placed it in a spoiler. It was an exercise, inconsequential, sure. But it did help me ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Towns and Kansas City, MO
Mature and intelligent. Somehow you managed it, I don't take ghost stories too seriously but your closing line sent the breath back down my throat. You've had a bunch of ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Alex
This is a free writing exercise. and I didn't care for him until I heard he was getting fired. He lumbers toward me, and I think about convicts marching towards ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: JP's reviews.
Whats the link Jasper?
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Flashbacks
Okay, to begin with, well done. This is really tough subject matter, laden with clichés and grey areas. I think you were successful in avoiding these for the most part. ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Help me help you. Request a review! (closed, for now)
Here it is again, for good measure.
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Magnificent Humphrey Wolf Adams (Part Two)
For fifteen minutes he stood in stone, barely breathing, eyeing the atlas. At last, he turned on a heel, like a rusty gate in the wind and said, “We are ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: I
Good God. How have I missed you.
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]
For having a bizarre signature.
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Britain should leave the EU. Discuss.
Mucho, There is something inherently dangerous and just plain immoral with this whole idea. Why should my country (USA) have to prop up world governments and provide immense foreign aid, ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Symbiosis DT
Never SB'd before, if I lag, or fail. Shoot me in the head and be done with it.
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Symbiosis
Name: Eric Sharp Age: 42 Gender: M Role: Civilian/Journalist/Editor of Nova Journal/Mouthpiece for Hyatt and Symbiosis Moral Strength: 1/10 Elastic morality. Will do anything for a quick buck. Has no ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Flashbacks
A review is coming.
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Drury Lane
Mikko! I still owe you a review on another work of yours. But here I am, and my this was quite a read. I will go over it line by ...
Oct 20, 2011
