joshuapaul

well, considering it was 'written on the spot' I assumed it was not proof read and my original review had no such accusations. My response to your response may have ...

True, writers enjoy writing. They enjoy seeing their name on the cover of a classic. They enjoy meeting their characters for the first time, they enjoy writing the first draft, ...

Well if it was written on the spot why not write it using the formating on the website rather than M.O word or whatever programme you used? Furthermore, to get ...

The following is the prologue to a story I would like to write, I have never written any fantasy but I read a bit so thought I would try my ...

He ran with a pace that was justified by his fear. Not a great opening line considering the content of the piece, inroducing 'the thing' would be a better start. ...

Want a full comprehensive critique or review? I will review chapters or short stories up to 2500 words, I specialise in character and plot but will nit pick. look foward ...

Jp here, hope the critique isn't too harsh... Alicia sat beside her open window reading a book for school. Jane Eyre, it was called, and it was good, but made ...

Hey, hope this helps. My eyes widen surprised to hear that, "What do you mean?" I started biting my nails that are already to short. This doesn't make sense. put ...

Hello. Hope I'm not too harsh but theres a few things a proof or two would have picked up. We stood in rows, with Xenos and I side by side, ...

Thanks everyone for the helpful feedback. This is a complete story so there will be no follow on pieces. Just thought I would post an alternative final paragraph. I prefer ...

The Suicide I was at home when I decided to kill myself. I had it planned; I wanted to be found on my bed, by my flatmate, in a suit ...

Love it. I'm a guy so I shouldn't love it but I did. Refreshing and poetic. Great writing.

Where to begin... First and formost when you submit a piece for review make sure you have reviewed 3 other pieces. Now for the review. The story and themes in ...

The title is deceptive and perhaps I should cange it. This is the complete story the end is ironic because he uses the same words (and so it goes) to ...

She Lived Leah stared at him. He turned his wrist, glanced down and saw he was running a little late for work, he hated working on Sundays. He gulped down ...