joshuapaul

Nice work ;)

My you have been busy Mike. How many more short stories are going to come from the catacombs? Are you writing any new stuff at the mo? Ah doesn't matter ...

Hey Kyllorac, If you could have a look at something for me, that would be great. Its for a contest due on the 30th, no pressure though, whenever is fine. ...

Done and done. Keep 'em coming.

Open for business? Have a look at this please? thanks in advance! JP

Capture That Feeling Competition I was delegated the theme: Exhaustion. Using this I could only think of one song, '500 Miles' - Proclaimers. A/N: This story deals with life after ...

Amazing. Simply amazing, well done. This is so original and strangely mesmerizing, I almost forgot I was on YWS and started thinking I was on Twitter. Brilliant!

Hey Priceless, Here for a critique as per your request. Okay, this is my first time writing any romance. Please be brutally honest Brutally honest? Really? No sugar coating? Okay. ...

Don't get me wrong, there is a place for poetry in story telling, but sometimes it can make the text so convoluted and messy that it is difficult to read. ...

I will be back to review this, looks good though and thoroughly enjoyed pt. 1.

banned for your strange avvi.

Hi there, Ikion’s muscles bunched beneath his sleek black pelt, anger fueling his frenzied journey through the dark redwood forest. Good start. The redwood description seems forced in there and ...

Brilliant story Mike. Very American Pyscho of you. Something about white collar murder tales always reeks of Patrick Bateman, this is still fairly original though, and the dialogue with his ...

Mike I will get your review to you via Email - It's far too long and comprehensive to fit here and I have edited in the format you sent it ...

Banned for saying nothing of the dog!