joshuapaul

Hi there, I will be brief because this is pretty good as is and I don't have time to be thorough. There are four houses; Gryffendor,Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin. Check ...

I'm not sure how you have done this. I, by no means claim any expertise when it comes to art and graphics. But, this seems pretty cool. I can almost ...

Wow-zah great work Twin, loved it. I would make one suggestion if I may - keep in mind the word limit, you have only used 90 out of a possible ...

My favourite, Flash fiction. Just one more sip I promised myself as the burgundy liquid fire swam down my throat. Okay well one more should really do it. Ah ha! ...

Wow this is pretty amazing. I don't read much poetry but this seemed great, it's almost like a nursery rhyme. I wish I had some genuine criticism but I can't ...

Who the hell is Bobby? And why is he always angry? This is cool though. What do you use? gimp or PS? I need to learn.

Yoda seemed to cover everything. I only have a couple of things to add. "Can I help you?" I asked her, picking up a sponge from a bucket of soapy ...

Ah, I want to critique this soooo bad, but something is telling me it's probably not fair for me to help. All I will say is you have done well. ...

It is so difficult to critique lyrics. Because most of the songs by successful musicians all read a little strangely without the accompanied music. It's an entirely different experience. That ...

This is pretty good I think :) one thing should 'tied' be 'tired' ?

OK let me begin by saying I never critique poetry. I never read poetry, let alone critique it. But I noticed you didn't have a title so I thought I ...

Hello, I'm going to be harsh because harsh is honest, and that's how we learn. This is pretty good, I seldom read through an entire piece on YWS in one ...

Hi there, I love to review intro's so here we go. The sun was low in the sky, casting a gentle, tranquil glow over the world and creating the elongated ...

Hey there, I want to critique this but I don't know where to begin. It's fine as is, every time I found something to criticize I realized that it was ...

If this is a satirical bite at how over opinionated we all are, and how we inadvertently force culture down the throat of anyone who stands to contradict our dearly ...