joshuapaul

Great work Nutty. P.S - Go the All Blacks!

As per my wall Oh how touching. I critiqued it like a short story, as though something needed to be said. I didn't treat it like a memoir, and in ...

Hi there, OK a couple of things to say here. Seeing them, Danny, Chrissy, Michael, Jean-Paul, Sahara, Misty, Anna Maria, John-Luc, Justice, Liberty, and all the others looking at me ...

Well it takes time to critique something. To read back through it with a fine-toothed comb. To find what stuck out, what needs changing. It takes me two seconds to ...

Hi there, I was going to critique this. Then I realised I reviewed the first chapter for you, and it seems all my suggestions fell upon deaf ears. I read ...

Wow this sounds great. Very deep stuff, which is quite rare for young writers. Despite how much I love this premise I think it will take a great deal of ...

Yes I should have buried this one out the back with the dog. It never really got off its feet, I never came back to it and it never really ...

Hello Confetti, Here I am, as promised. Let's go. I think my first memory of you is when we were six. This is good, but a little confusing, are we ...

I will extract what I can from your comment. However, I must remind you that this isn't a standalone piece. If you read something that ends in 'chapter 5' or ...

Kuyt, and... hmm I can't seem to to work out who the guy on the left is?

Haha, this is great. I agree with the earlier reviewers, I would suggest a caption. I was watching it for probably over a minute trying to decide if it was ...

Ha -- brilliant! Is this for Snoinks competition? In any case this is great. That’s just our way and it works fine for all the swine so I’m proud to ...

Hmm, I really wanted to critique this Twit, but it appears you have a fleet of reviewers who have probably covered anything I would suggest. So I might just address ...

Hmm, I think I was a little nervous, this was at my sisters wedding reception shortly before I was to MC.

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