joshuapaul

I wanted to express my admiration, but as a rule I don't 'like' work that the author has liked. This also read's like lyrics, and is blighted with fixable errors. ...

Wow this was tough to read. I must confess, I skipped a handful of spoilers. Good idea though, and well executed I guess, light and funny so well done.

This was pretty good. I'm all very new to lyric critiquing so I won't harp on. I was wondering, however, why change it from a poem to a song? or ...

THIS IS GOOD - TAKE IT SOMEWHERE. (I've started titling reviews, see above, wellIhaven'tstartedthisisaoneoff.) So this is fantastic, I'm not going to delve into great details because it was too ...

Oh Confetti, you have ousted me. It's my nemesis, capitalized words mid sentence, so allusive under my careful editing eyes. Thanks for the nitpicks, I will amend it now.

After our dialogue, I would really appreciate an opinion on this: Nitpicks, macros you name it.

Hola, Please read my story and tell me if you like it or not. Thank you, JP

Hello, long time reader first time poster, A gift, for you.

All done. Next?

Old Man I killed a lamb last week. Paula was stuffing a hind leg with garlic cloves and rosemary stalks. Her sleeves up and hair tied in a summer knot, ...

Wow this is a tough read. I must confess I wanted to stop after the first line but I pushed on as best I could. I'm not entirely sure what ...

Hello Priceless, here as per your request, that been said, I am very happy you invited me to read this. It's good, but you are right there is something wrong ...

Okay, I will get through yours soon Priceless. Just had a read over.

A/N: I have taken time off writing theme-orientated short stories, to write this. In a way I wanted to remind myself I could still write action, and fast paced prose. ...

Hi Janna, Reviewed as requested and thanks for Emailing me this in word format. I have edited it thoroughly and provided as much insight as I can, scrutinizing your every ...