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IX - The Departure We both stood amongst the chaos. Mike held his neck and blood dribbled through his fingers down the back of his hand. “We best move them ...

X – The end of Mike Fisken and Claire’s confession I lifted Claire and slipped into Mike’s vacated seat. He was gone, even if the others didn’t know it. If ...

Wow, just wrote you a review. Stupid YWS just submitted it halfway through then deleted it and now I'm left with nothing. This is kind of good. The sort of ...

One comment. I would say poetry is more popular here than any other form of writing. I often gripe about the lack of decent fiction. And here I am still ...

Thanks Heather as always! and Lava. And Confetti, once again thank you for picking out all those little errors I seem to miss. I admit the ending was rushed. I ...

Deme, Your thoughts, please?

An easy one. At your own pace, of course.

The Making Joseph watched Jacob, who laboured over the wood, balancing beams under his thick forearms. He took long strides, with his sandals strapped tight and his face gritted. “Just ...

Okay back as promised. Let me begin by saying, this is my favourite form of fiction to write - probably because I am lazy - so it goes without saying, ...

Okay this needs a lot of work. My edits are in red. Also a couple of tips at the conclusion. I love writing and always wanted to have a profession ...

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This is amazing, must run however. Back later to review. P.S- this is for the exclusive - let's leave out JP - mod contest is it?

A/N: Fourth story with the common theme 'What happens when people fall in love' 313 Brazilian rosewood, back and sides, Hard-Maple top unfinished. Clock ticked twelve, too late to be ...

Wow - You have done so well with the ending. Much better. Two things I noticed, occasionally you use the same adjective in succession that is to say, you repeat ...