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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Afterlife

    managing the gates of heaven was a dull job that consisted mainly of explaining that, yes you are dead, and no you cannot go back to haunt someone. Good start. ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism (Rewrite) - Prologue

    I liked this. I wasn't hooked at first but it was short enough for me to press on. I think this is really original, whilst reading it part of me ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 1/10

    Thanks for the reviews. Just a quick note. This isn't segmented as a story. That is to say if I encountered this anywhere else I personally would read it all ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Come closer, my pretties. (Re-Opened!)

    Another one for you. Take your time it's in ten parts and rather long :)

    Sep 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    It's long :D

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]

    This is pro Twit. Almost every line went by without any jarring little errors. It's very balanced and I think you have done an amazing job fleshing out your protagonist. ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Kafka's intellectually stimulating reviews

    Here it is. Ten pieces, 13000 words, go on....

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 1/10

    A/N: This is part 1 of a 10 part short story. It is inspired almost entirely by Stephen King's work and I consider it one of my best stories. It's ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 2/10

    A/N Read part 1 first. II – A run in with Rafa and the cowboy It was only a few steps, but by the time I got to the door ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 3/10

    III – An old acquaintance, a prophecy “Hi-” I began, swallowing, studying his face for a flash of recognition, “Do I know you?” “I don’t think so, Ross. Can I ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 4/10

    IV – The birds and a walk in the fog With every minute that ticked by a new theory rose from the truckers table, each more dire than the last. ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 5/10

    V – The return of Mick Sabre, a serious talk with Joe Tricarico and the attacking bull I had to clench my jaw and cover my mouth to keep it ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Fog - Part 6/10

    VI Paranoia and a resignation letter I had to hold Janey. We had two bodies, and screaming and crying didn’t help but she wouldn’t stop. Neither would the other kids. ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 7/10

    VII Visitors That’s when it began. It was sudden. A thud. I was snatched midway of my third read-through and everyone was suddenly on their feet, even bloody Mike Fisken, ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog - Part 8/10

    VIII The new threat No one knew what to say, the truckers found themselves back on a seat and Joe stood close to the door holding the shotgun like a ...

    Sep 11, 2011


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