joshuapaul

Come on guys judge everything on it's individual merit instead of firmly deciding ' This defies my set of beliefs - therefore it can't possibly be a credible, readable story.' ...

Hello, Open for business? right? Thanks.

Please.

charlie old boy for you.

I'd forgotten how the bells sound in the morning. Not strong enough start, considering how short this is. I want to remember the first line when I finish. I don't ...

This needs a lot of work. Give it a good proof read, pick up little things like. friend friends and so on. There are plenty of little errors that kept ...

Por favor

Hello, here, an easy one.

Like Sarge said there is something missing. I think he just about covered it all. But I will add, this would be much stronger if you saved the revelation of ...

This was good and funny DarthAJ. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get to you for a review. I am exhausted so I will be brief. While ...

“Sarah, you can’t just walk out of a meeting with Mr. Robertson, what’s he going to think?” Sarah Webster had been with the company since she was 27 and after ...

eww, gross, a love poem.

You like Poetry. Have a short story. (It's the closest I might ever get to poetry)

The painting, the frame and the little things Apropos . Her parting word, etched in black ink on a torn corner of newsprint. That was over a month ago now, ...

I thought this was delightful. It did seem a little rushed - not the pace of the story, but I think a couple more edits before you posted would have ...