joshuapaul

*sigh*

The first poem I have written. Something of a free-write at that. ....... Bread broken by hands as dry as the cowboys lunge, and later they hold quiet good byes ...

It's a little unnerving dear boy. I was never one for poetry, but it is you and I owe you a review or two by now. So I will make ...

I will be brief because many of the points I raise in Vimini are relevant here, though some aren't and I will get to that. So, you have continued to ...

The most recent bill to pass through congress declared Pizza(or rather the sauce they use as a base) was in fact a vegetable. The bill was drafted by two lobby ...

Let me begin with a sound bite borrowed from Capote, That isn't writing at all, it's typing. An observation he famously made about Kerouac's On The Road. His dismissal, of ...

A few notes. Show don't tell, I know you think you are showing but it is far to telly. Consider the last few lines, how can you evoke an image ...

Has enough time passed for another request? Mathew_Beta.exe

Please Charlie, would you review this.

Mathew_Beta.exe The first message I received from him was nine days after he died. Dad, is that you? You may be thinking I’m insane, perhaps I am. But those words ...

He slept under the desk at my feet, with his legs out straight. I reached down and roughed his ears while the laptop whirred to life. It made strange sounds ...

I'm going to briefly talk about poetry, not necessarily this poem in it's entirety but publishing poetry. I think people write poems for a number of reasons, one being to ...

I will get to this. It's clear you have put a lot of work in and it shows. I really can't find any immediate criticism. Work like this is rare, ...

Okay, I sort of just dropped a scene in. I'm rather lost, if I am doing it wrong let me know.

Eric Sharp|Nova District|Nova Journal Office Heels clap as the intern moves across the office, spreading her fingers through her wicker blond hair, resetting it. She uses the plate glass wall ...