jonny911

CSI: Miami

I think you need to have some sort of sameness in your characters: otherwise, people will be so confused. Mainly because real life is complicated, and unless your readers are ...

neon purple!

you turned something boring into something psychological: but that doesn't make it not boring. I din't really like the humor, either.

6/10 cause it makes we wish I had a 360

What is that supposed to mean?

flooding

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Why don't you put this in the Title Association (or something like that) topic? Someone might help you get ideas for the plot.

I'll be blunt: I don't like it. Everything is too sudden and too random: I couldn't really understand the point to everything. The grammar wasn't very good. The prologue was ...

I just finished a very contreversial series (his dark materials) and really liked it. The author challenged a lot of ways of thinking, especially about religion. I'm doing a huge ...

Fantasy is really a genre that can't be blamed for cliche fantasy stories. It's fantasy: that means anything goes. If your worried about wether your story is cliche, think of ...

Here are some definitions of evil: morally bad or wrong; "evil purposes"; "an evil influence"; "evil deeds" morally objectionable behavior having the nature of vice that which causes harm or ...

SCOTT The fate of the galaxy is at stake besides that line , which is just to random without more explanation, I liked the play. It was good and easy ...

I'd love to BASE jump. I chuckle in the face of danger