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I thought it was good, but it was kind of too short to say anything specific, you know? I'd like to read the story after this to figure out what ...

Dangerous Ink By Jonathan Hyde Chapter I: What I saw from the peak I felt an uncomfortable liquid oozing down my throat, and spat it out. I was so tired; ...

There are 3 cliche links here. I can't wait to see that story.

Sounds like a depressing (almost emo) story. I'd stay away. Dangerous Ink

There you go. Cinderella

Good flow, and I felt it was really powerful. "Halloween Horror with one stroke of light" seems a little off-topic for me. Overall, I really wouldn't change much (poetry isn't ...

Wait, don't you have to post a new story? Oh, nevermind. Sorry (I reviewied the Hidden by mistake).

I'm with Gingerlizzy: the flow was just off somehow. But, I thought it was powerful, if a topic that has been done before. Finally, the three stanzas never reall built ...

Yo Gabba Gabba!

Sorry, alexia, but you should have put this story in fantasy fiction. Oh yeah, and It sorta reminds me of Eragon (but on the dragons side), which a lot of ...

Wow. It's been a month since someone last did this? I'll do it later, I think, since Ultra-Short fiction died (come back to us!).

It snowed in New York!? Anyways, you have an awesome back yard. You're lucky!

8/10. did you write that?

I liked it a lot! The best part was the imagery you gave: I really felt like I was inside your dream! And it also had a great story for ...

DANGEROUS INK By Jonathan Hyde Chapter I Note: This is the old version of chapter 1. I'll be posting the new chapter 1 soon, which is a lot different, so ...