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Beppe walked in to the restraunt, pockets jangling with euros dying to be spent. His stomach rumbled. The bartender, Cesarina, tuned to greet her new guest. "Hello, how are..." "Some ...

Cool! I got to try these sometimes!

Good! No major problems I can see. The only gammatical error was that you were missing a comma here. Then bye , I suppose I could make out small humid ...

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I'm reading the Subtle Knife (sequel to Golden Compass). It's very good.

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OK, I had this idea for a video game once, but I'm thinking of making it into a novel. Here goes... Plot:The world is divided into two peoples: the magus ...

10,853 words... I'd finish it, divide it in half and put it in the advanced critiques section. If you don't want to spend all the points, break it into 5 ...

I only get tired out after playing a game for two hours or so... I get so immersed that I don't care that my arm is aching. And, if you ...

I'm a vegitarian. What color is a zebra?

How about this? Category: Animals everyone is afraid of. 1. Rats

Why do you always badger me?

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The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe