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ha ha awsum Usually i get bored of reading scripts, but this one kept me entertained the whole way through. To be honest I think all the errors were picked ...

I want you, need you. You dont understand, Havent realised What you mean to me, The world is blunted when I see you, Though shapes recieve a sharper edge. Life ...

hey, i thought this poem was very good. It flowed nicely and had some good imagery. there may have been some minor mistakes, however they didn't detrract from the quality ...

I was wondering, what does everyone think about musicians as poets. The lyrics they write, is it just another kind of poetry? I was just thinking, because in every genre ...

My second attempt at poetry, not really finished it, tell me what you think... Sometimes i scream at the sky just for the sake of making a sound I jump ...

heya, thanks for all the responses, i will take it all on board. This was my first attempt at poetry,so thanks for the helpfull advice. you should show it to ...

heya, thanks for all the responses, i will take it all on board. This was my first attempt at poetry,so thanks for the helpfull advice. cheers, jones

I probably shouldn't love you, i should stick to what i know. But baby please kiss me, one last time, before you go. You're standing at the station, waiting for ...

hey, this is good. it's short, but the quality is high. the characters emotions are described well and as a reader i could relate to them. i like the way ...

Entry for scasha's conest, flaws are fantastic The Thief in the Night "A diamond with a flaw is better than a pebble without." The sky was clear and in the ...

This was interesting, i can tell you're a good writer, even from this short piece. Although it wasn't a story the writing still flowed, was easy to read and made ...

The Kiss That Saved A golden sun hung low above ebbing, calm water, a glowing orb suspended over shimmering liquid. The light silhouetted a group on the beach, as they ...

hey, i liked this story, it ran smoothly and the discussion flowed. maybe you should give the characters a little more background, like say how they know each other, why ...

Entry For Cal's Character Contest The Road To The Future Picture 15 018. She A worried frown creased above the girl’s designer sunglasses. Her usually faultless, manicured nails bore the ...

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