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My character Real Name: Charlie Johnson Age:16 Gender: Male Appearance: medium height with deep brown hair that's kind of long but not too long. He not muscular but he's not ...

I walked down the marble corridor to wooden doors. The wooden doors handles had a spectacle of engravings on them and were shaped in the head of lions. I would ...

Since I only review story this review will probably quite short. I like the character you've created, when you find out what he has done you know that he is ...

me again I just wrote the last review so can't be asked to do another one. The problem is still the same, chapter length. I don't see a problem with ...

I don't know anything about grammar so I won't try and correct any mistakes you might of made. I thought it was a good start to your story. It was ...

James Murky water gathered be up in tower of water Their was no were to go this was it. or was it. I felt a surge of energy and lightning ...

*what age city is this cause I thought it was like medevialish not modern sorry if I'm wrong* James/ Lightning I paced up and down the room watching the princess ...

James\ Lightning We were in the farming district it was a peaceful area so easy to blend in with. The princess hands were tied using some rope I'd found in ...

James/ Lightning I had followed the princess from her camp it was easy to blend into the slums that followed the army around in tents looting their enemies and eating ...

*I can still join right since you just said it or was that just for the previous post?* I'm gonna assume, yes Name: James Zakady Age: 18(just) Gender: Male Element: ...

Charlie\ Artemis "Hey Charlie you want to be on are Chariot team"Daeyme asked. I turned around surprised. "Yeah sure" I said, Cori smiled when she saw who my other new ...

*I've changed his age to 16 since that's how old most peoples characters are* Charlie\ Artemis I walked down the dust path with Cori towards the stables, I wasn't really ...

can we start and people can still join?

but at the end of the last book didn't all the lesser gods kids get cabins too?

Name: Charlie Hack Age: 14 Gender: Male Parent: Artemis personality: He's a nice guy and tries to make friends with everybody some people just don't like him though. Skills: Being ...