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  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    JOHN Liz walked up to behind "so are you going to let them have all the fun" Liz asked. "yeah going to some mud riddled camp would be fun" John ...

    Jan 18, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John The plauge still wondered around in the meadow. Kate walked down the stairs closely followed by Melepone " no need to worry about the plauge it's under strict Oders ...

    Jan 17, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John heard a scream outside. So a few seconds later the group had run inside Chase at lead carrying Emily. Ellis was behind him and Ballow followed "what the hell" ...

    Jan 17, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John John was shocked as Melepone spoke "what do you mean it's not going to last" John said he liked his new self. "well what you touched is called a ...

    Jan 16, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    "I think it's a medieval hotel" John "I look like a twat" John said sitting on Kate's staring at the mirror opposite Jake walked out of bathroom in his boxers, ...

    Jan 16, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John sat on the hard floor it was the park again. "Hows your leg" Kate said "buggered" John replied "but I think it's only dislocated" John continued Kate looked unconvinced.John ...

    Jan 15, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Death's Apprentice Chapter Two: Slowly

    I thought the second chapter was good. Even though it had just a few grammar problems the only one I thought really mattered was this one and it isn't really ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John was untying kid after kid some, like Abi were bleeding heavily "get over to the tree and find some heavy branches". John had untied all the others but a ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    The group formed a circle around some of the groups weaker members like Emily who had been knocked down a lot John knowing that Jonathan was a bad shot pulled ...

    Jan 13, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John slept with Jake to his right and Jonathan to his left as John stirred the boy on his left woke up John started conversation "you were dam good with ...

    Jan 12, 2009
  • Archive Re: Roamers

    "Yeah it's fine"

    Jan 11, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    "What are you talking about" Chase said in answer to John question, "come on Chase be honest you like her and she likes you" Chases face was a cloud. John ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John John as still standing next to Kari when she took out her history book "Wow! that's one big book" Kari nodded in agreement John looked around and saw Chase ...

    Jan 10, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    "It's okay I don't bite, I get punched in the nose by other people" John looked her up and down not sure if she appreciated his pathetic stab at humour ...

    Jan 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Unforgiven

    Ollie walked alone down the dark streets a chill wind seeping through the houses on the winds Ollie heard a little girls voice "mommy wake up mommy please wake up" ...

    Jan 9, 2009


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X