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  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John six years old 1913: John ran around in the courtyard with his little brother Alex. While his mother sat talking to grandma. It was strange his mother always got ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Chandra Reborn

    Name: Joshin kye [Sir] Age: 21 Race:Immortal Status: Trainer Appearance: He has long Black hair that's tied up and wears a white t shirt and white jeans he has a ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John " you bastards" John said as he watched his robot self shoot Jonathan. "Don't be so angry John, It only the people who didn't trust you not one bit ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John "Chase you didn't disappoint, well actually you did, I expected you too to chose me but then I guess you don't consider me part of the group anymore, do ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John "Chase step forward please" John said. Chase stepped forward looking puzzled "You have choice to make Chas I'm going to hurt one of you, any of the group, if ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Pack chapter 2

    Jake had been trekking across the Alps For the past week and now had a nice tan. His sister Kat, well that was her pet name, suited her considering she ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John John woke up on a cold metel table his hands tied to the table. Not that he had the strenth to move them "hello John " a misty voice ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled

    I don't have any critiques bit I have some ideas for names. The Last song, Hand in Hand [because she's holding her son's Hand] ,Ticking by, The Last Countdown. Some ...

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    John John looked for his snow suit their wasn't one. "John come over here" Melepone whispered, John walked over too Melepone "I'm sorry John but your not coming with us, ...

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: New on here

    Hi welcome to yws I recomend the story books or the groups, theirs one for eveyone I think (goes into deep thought)

    Jan 22, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Pack

    Yeah thanks for the review I was in bit of a rush when I route the last bit, and R.E [Religious education] it's just what it's called in my school ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Archive Re: san francisco total war

    Jack I walked in to the restaurant and saw My target Harry Carl his two body guards got up with as he left the Asian eating alone so Harry could ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Pack

    *This is my first story I've posted on here, please tear it apart with reviews* Jake sat next to Zec at the back of their R.E class, next to t.he ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi.

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! wellllllllllllllllccccccccooommmmeeee tttttttooooo yws I know this is an old post but I decided to say hi any way

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie!

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii wellllllllllcome to ywsssssssssssssssssssss Ignore my above and welcome to yws.

    Jan 21, 2009


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