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Re: Boarding School
*I'm just gonna drop myself in here hope it's okay* Adam I walked over to a girl who was standing in front of Matt's car. I had a brief conversation ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School
Name: Adam stone Age: 16 Grade:11 Gender:Male Description: Tall, chilled composure often wears black Jeans and wears a lumberjack coat whenever he can personality: calm and chilled very cynical about ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Chapter Two: Releif
Jack stared up the barrel of the loaded gun. He new he had to chose his next word's carefully but couldn't help himself from blurting out. "Please, I didnt mean ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: 13
Name:Jake hodgsen Gender:male Age:25 Appearance: black hoodie blonde hair and jeans, blue eyes skills: Stealing history: has been a thief for along time is known for a few major robberies ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one : Caught
*not really sure what to call the book yet any suggestions welcome I don't care if their cheesy either* Chapter one: Caught Ring,ring The phone paused for second before continuing. ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Cherub
*Screw it any one can start after my profile* Name: Jack white How were his parents killed: His mother died giving birth to him and after a year his dad ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Kids in the playground
I really liked your piece it was well written. No grammer mistakes that I can find. Yet I have to complain about one thing. The moral I don't think it's ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Cherub
Yeah James was I just did that because I thought it would be good if they all started friends after being at cherub for a while
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Cherub
Sorry I wasn't clear their all ten some of you seem a little. Confused about certain things in the story. Go to cherubcampus in a search engion it has sample ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Cherub
The best book in the world. All hail Robert muchamores book's What is cherub for those of you who haven't read cherub curse you, not really. it's a boarding school ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Disneyland Romance
sorry about this review totally out I was new when I posted it it but that isn't really an excuses anyway a hundred sorrys and then another hundred sorrys so ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
John John opened his eyes slightly being careful not to draw attention, but when he saw that Emily was gone and Chase was in a coma . He jumped up, ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Candles on the Water
John John had gotten away with Alex and a age globe. Alex had strugled when John had put Alex hand to the globe. He was still stropy as his twelve ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Second life
[first script I've done so please destroy my hopes and dreams with your reviews make me cry deep into the night so I wake up and go bitch and yell ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Detention
I thought this was well good quite funny but maybe have Addie as more of a Bad girl black hair ruined school uniform. lose tie always gum chewing, something like ...
Jan 27, 2009
