jessiieeboo

I can relate to this. It sorta reminds me of something that happened to me. Nice wording too. Short and sweet.

Beautiful choice of words. It really makes me think, Its beautiful. :]

Your words confuse me. Maybe it would be more helpful if you revised again. I love the idea though. :]

Thanks for the heads up. I will keep that in mind sorry I am a nucience. I have been told many times before.

I have noticed that this has sign language with in it. Very creative. Uniquie(sp?). lol Anyways, I look foward to viewing your other peices of work.

Words can not describe this poem. Lovely writting. Your improvement has made a change to it. Good change though. :]

Aww! This is really good so far. I didn't see any errors so far but hey who says thats a bad thing! :] Very nice, but sudle, begining. Please contiune. ...

Hey I'm Jess I love your first chapter. Keep writting. Feel free to PM me or anything. Have fun and keep up the great work. :]

hey guys. my name is jess. i came across this site and decided to give it a try. anyone else new here? wanna chat? leave a reply! :D