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Re: My photography...
I love all of these pictures But I like the second and fifth the best. The moods are very typical for these photographs..
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Ballad Of Maryling And Christian
soooo cute i really like this poem. adorable. happy writting!
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Ariel Part 1
Interesting peice. Never read one like this. I like it but it was a bit confusing at points. He didn’t love her, h ad never loved her, would never love ...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Emma
Very nice. I like the fact its from a dogs point of view.\It made me want to keep reading. Love it. You should def do more pieces like this. :]
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Meeting Sister
Very nice work I agree with the first poster but if your teacher likes that then keep it that way. xD
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Good-bye My Perfect Guy.
Although I broke your heart I hope you know my feelings For you are strong... I wish I hadn't told you it was time to move on.. to see other ...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Sem Esperança Ridículo Sonho-A Ridiculous Dream without Ho
Ooo! Very cute but deep writting. I think you should somewhat elaborate(sp?) on your thoughts. Maybe make it alittle longer? Good start. :]
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Lexicalized: A Brief Summary of Myself..for anyone who cares
Hey whats up? I'm Jess also a new user to YWS. I joined yesterday adn so far so good. I haven't met many friends yet but hey, what do expect. ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight Seagull: Chapter One Flickin' Erasers
Very good start but you NEED to check your spelling and re-read atleast twice. Here is the mistakes you made that I corrected. :] Other wise very good. :]
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: broken love
This could have alittle more spice in it but other wise very good this doesn't make sence though: Sometimes like you hate me, or at least that's how it seems. ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Sweet Song (it way better then my last poem I sware!)
Very nice work :]
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Trapped Over 13
I like the subject but I think you should expand on your ideas for this piece. Make it alittle more detailed as well. Good start. :] Keep working on this.
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Seen Any Movies Lately?
I saw Music and Lyrics this morning! Haha. I am a sap for love movies. Yes, I do cry at the endings. xD but thats okay. Crying at the ends ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Carey.*Re-Edited*
Why am I put into this world? Is there no meaning for me to be here? Because all I see is me failing life as we know it. Giving up ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Love, I'm Sorry
Friend, To every heart I have ever broken, to every friendship I've ruined, to every mean thing I ever said, it all comes down to the last two words, that ...
Jan 12, 2008
