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Hello ambercoultis! This piece was very intriguing, it made me want to read more because it was so subtle but you lacked on descriptionof your charcters. I felt like it ...

I like this but I think it could have been alittle longer. I agree with what HollieWood said. You told us what we already new about Bella. Over all it ...

*GASP!* My, my, how could you do this..... *shakes head* so sad. Edward Cullen is my absolute dream guy and you made him a complete jerk! Although, this is very ...

Well Jabber had pretty much said it all. :shock: I have to say, it went by alittle too quickly for my liking. Most of all I think that the ending ...

*laughs* Jack Frost, Ha! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy the community and people here. We don't bite..... much. Haha. Well I am done here. If you have any ...

Hey there issyman! Welcome to YWS. You will deffinatly make lots of friends here and by your intests that you metioned you have stumbled across a stutable place for you. ...

Ah, a person who loves to write!? No way! xD Haha. I have a puppy too! Her name is Susu she is one year old. I am going to be ...

Chapter One: Zac. Last day of school at last! Finally this school year can come to an end and summer time can come and over take my teenage mind! I ...

Very nice although I was disappointed with the length of it. My mind was anticipating more than what was written. Maybe another stanza or two to gradually lead the poem ...

Her body became over taken, her flawless curls bounced as she had swayed her hips. Every bystander had watched as beauty radiated through out the room. A crowd formed as ...

Alittle confusing but I think it is good. You show your knowledge for physics xD Not too bad.

Loved this poem. Reminds me of the book Twilight in a way. Very nice.

This made me think of my ex... Oh boy here come the tears.. Good poem though.... *sniffle*

I love the first one. The colors capture my eye. Very nice. Keep up the great work.

I like the last one. Its suddle but cute. Sorta sends a message like, 'you don't know me and I don't know you.' XD very nice.