jessicarabbit

This was a very interesting story. You know that today is the day when all the freaks come in, you don't know why, nor do you care, all you know ...

“Wow, sounds like he was mad.” “He was,” Kelly said, sipping her drink. “He hasn’t called me all week.” “How often does he normally call you?” Chad asked. Kelly blushed. ...

I really enjoyed this. :) For some reason, it reminds me of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime, even though that was about a boy with autism. ...

“Hey, I’m on my way over.” “Okay, I’ll meet you at the door.” Kelly Benson snapped her phone shut and made her way to the front door. As always, when ...

I would use it as a flag and I would plant it in the ground like I was walking on the moon. :D

I have to agree with the previous review. At first when you mentioned a monster, I thought maybe it was Godzilla or something, but it sounds more like a bomb ...

I have to agree with angels-symphony. There are a few too many adjectives. The reader can get a bit lost. It had started to rain and I realised the fire ...

This was interesting! I definitely found it hard to turn away from and I wanted to know what happened. The mysterious woman is a very interesting character, both dangerous and ...

Oh, my gosh! I'm not the only person on the planet who loves ER and thinks Luka Kovack is the sexiest doctor ever!!!! :D Comparing my doctor to Kovach is ...

I loved how you guys both called the one paragraph an info dump. :lol: I can take a hint! Seriously though, very constructive reviews. Thanks! :D Jessica Rabbit

I wanted to show how Michelle was figuratively smothered by her parents, and developed into a self-concious, shy, and (for lack of a better word) boring adult. I was planning ...

Note to new readers: There is an introductory chapter titled "Perfection-Intro" It is not necessay to the story, but it provides a little background info. --------------- Michelle’s deep brown eyes ...

That's a very good point, Adam. It reminds me of a theme from Ayn Rand's The Fountainhead . According to the main character, it is better to be selfish than ...

Wow, that was awesome! I really liked it. One small thing... I dashed for the dark space under the big wood thing next to the other big thing my prison ...

I totally agree with you, Ofour. I have a cousin who suffers from mild autism, and math is not one of his strong suits. However, he is a decent speller, ...