jessibee

ok, this was really cute! it honestly made me laugh out loud in the end. it's simple yet heartwarming in a way. great job

thanks kitty15, you're right the "your" in the second stanza was a typo but i fixed it now. about the punctuations...yea I'm not one for punctuation unless I'm trying to ...

the blackness... the void inside me surfaces whenever you're around whenever you touch me. when you hold me. this deep abyss crawls up my skin you're the worst I let ...

your rhythm scheme of a-b-b-a(until the last stanza), i thought was creative...and your figurative language really makes the poem come to life. i liked it! keep up the good work

i really liked this poem. you did a good job helping me visualize the scene. and i liked how the reader doesn't fully know what is going on until the ...

wow i really loved this poem...it's not pish posh at all! it just flowed so nicely and your feelings really came across...and the form and everything...wow very nicely done

this is stunningly written. you really could understand the tone of the poem. the second stanza was my favorite. it truly captured the way i feel sometimes about those "perfect" ...

hey guys! i'm jessi, and i just joined the Young Writers Society today! here's a little about me... lately i've really gotten into writing poetry (weather I'm any good at ...