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your little newt nemesis fellow, i found quite amusing along with the rest of the poem...i don't know why though, i guess it was very whimsical. but i have to ...

this was good. really good. i can honestly say i can imagine my mom singing this for me at the kitchen table. it made me ROFL. and the rythmn made ...

i like it. alot! it's hard to find this kind of "struggle in love" poem in these forums. its basic, straight to the point and heartfelt. i can totally relate ...

yes, i have to agree with mad, on that the last line was a bit random...but random isn't bad it leaks out a smile to the reader. the poem all ...

you walked into my life like a child's dream. with darkness shadowing your face; but the morning light hid in your eyes. mysterious and enticing. sweet angelic face. the static ...

Yup D this place is a friendly as the grinch on halloween :D hehe at first i thought you were being sarcastic, then i realized you said Halloween, not Christmas ...

woo hoo Amelia! yay i can count on you for your insite! thank you! ok, well the girl doesn't want to be with the all. she's trying to get the ...

The shivering of each other didn't make much sense to me, other than to satisfy the rhyme with "another" (it sounds a little like you're writing to they rhyme instead ...

haha! i loved this! you captured perfectly how i feel about the 1st day of school and it made me laugh out loud too because, i know you keep hearing ...

aww thanks guys! gosh, everyone is soo nice here! thanks for the warm welcome I've posted some stuff up, feel free to let me know what you're for the stories ...

thank you poor imp & firestarter!! i took care of both problems! gosh, people here are really nice! thanks again! xjess

Smiles, Laughs and Funny Faces towels wrapped tightly around us chatter and laughter make the air warm like a summer breeze sisterly whispers among friends suddenly interrupted by a cold ...

hey, can anyone tell me how i join a usergroup?? i just can't seem to figure it out... & another thing...if i was planning on submitting something but then decided ...

i actually like questions in poems...this made me feel like i was really in the writers head wondering all this, but the repetition of the magic eight was a bit ...

great...from now on I'm going to be second guessing myself for hours to make sure I'm not being too conceited...which to be honest i sound like i am sometimes in ...