jessabelle4C

First of all-- Great Job! it's amazing! There were a few grammar mistakes, but then again we all make them. i like how you go through everything- the experiences. With ...

I finished getting ready; brushing my teeth, applying make up to cover up most of my scars on my face and arms, and double check that I didn’t look anything ...

How old is everyone? When the main character doesn't know what to do with Joey it makes her seem young but then as she starts getting ready she seems much ...

When I awoke in the morning, I looked around the hotel room. The layout was different then most hotels we stayed at, with two bathrooms- one in the bedroom and ...

What I saw in eyes so empty. when soon I would be made full. Was a blessing, that I'd be destined to forsake. With every change in pace, I'd find ...

sorry, i'll fix that. i meant to put it in italics, but my brother pushed me off the couch.. my NEW laptop is okay. :D Thank you! I know I ...

i'm guessing like Anne.. that's french right?

After going through the story many times, I fixed all the grammar errors. Which I'll admit was a lot. :oops: I'm working on the next chapter right now, any requests ...

I'm stuck on the whole review ratio, yes to some it's a such a chore and all they want to do is write. But it does you expose to other ...

I like it. a lot! Of course, there's always the grammar mistakes EVERYONE makes :) I first have to say i enjoy how the character is so much different from ...

My brain didn't even register what was going into my bag. I'm surprise that damn old thing hasn't exploded from pressure over the years. It's been through many events like ...

1)Twilight Saga My reason is because it had such a depressing mood.if you've read my stories you;d think i was a hypocrite... so I'll explain, Who wouldn't want to live ...

Amazing job once again!! i liked how you went into a back story of the truck, it made and supported the fact that Clyde was very "attached: to the car. ...

Please… an interesting word. It’s like begging, but not quite. It’s soft, and meek. It’s a request. It lets people know that you want something. I love this beginning. It ...

\ Jeremy Bless is the reason I believe in second chances. He taught me that I, Jayme Wilson, have my own perspective and my own will. Jeremy Bless is blind. ...