jerichofiction

If you aren't planning on editing it, then don't post on here. This is meant for you to receive critique with open arms. Not to argue with the critiques. There's ...

Alright... So please remember to put spaces after every comma and period. I'm in high school. I've been a freshman, and I know what its like to want to be ...

I step down out of the bus and almost trip. Ash laughs and I reply with a "Shut the fuck up" and we both just smile. I start to walk ...

i think it was nice beceuse thats what normal life is liek Yeah I try to make it as relative as possible

I personally dislike rape writings,but ehh,it was alright. You need to be more descriptive about things. Bek mentioned some of your flaws. I know I'm not too helpful,but you're a ...

Wow. You need to put SPACES into your sentences and look at your punctuation and spelling. I think you even spelled "fuck" wrong at one point, which seems to be ...

I haven't read enough into it to enjoy it yet,but please write more,and I shall follow. I presume this is a girl,considering you are one?

Loved it,bro. So relative

What the fuck is that noise? So loud...Like Bairing. Fuck it,fine. I'll open my eyes. I go ahead and squint open my eyes to see the sun peering through my ...